Thursday, October 18, 2018

My Holidays !!!

WALT: Write a story about the holidays.
SC: I will make the story interesting and hook the readers.


  1. kai ora rangi its wai your sister i like your holiday recount i had the same holiday but not as boring it really sounds fun your holiday nice work

  2. Kia ora Rangi,
    Wow! it sounds like you had a bit of fun on the holidays. By the way I just wanted to say you used nothing quite a lot and it kind of takes the hooks away for your story. But on the other hand I would like to say good work and make sure you use more different hooks.
    Nga Mihi
    Yvette WILSON (your friend)