SC: I will make the story interesting and hook the readers.
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Kia ora Here is my poster of Lorde, which I have completed for Day 1, Activity 1 (for the teaser week) of summer learning Journey here is th...
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Kia ora Here is my poster of Lorde, which I have completed for Day 1, Activity 1 (for the teaser week) of summer learning Journey here is th... -
breakdown are not the best you can has anyone had a breakdown.
kai ora rangi its wai your sister i like your holiday recount i had the same holiday but not as boring it really sounds fun your holiday nice work
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rangi,
ReplyDeleteWow! it sounds like you had a bit of fun on the holidays. By the way I just wanted to say you used nothing quite a lot and it kind of takes the hooks away for your story. But on the other hand I would like to say good work and make sure you use more different hooks.
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