WALT: Apply my knowledge of narrative writing to create an effective fictional story.
SC: I will-
- Create a setting by writing about who, what, where and when.
- Use descriptive and figurative language
- Hook my reader with dialogue, question, vivid description,...
DADWAVERS
Description Action Dialogue Where Adverb Verb Estimation of time
Rhetorical Question.
Rhetorical Question.
VOCABULARY:
deduced retreat witness clue locate encounter evidence
hunch nervous divulge observe investigate motive
uninhabited nervous suspect desperation hidden revealed
determined decoy conceal divert secluded uncovered
Have you ever been lost? Well I’ll tell you a story about
the legend of the campsite .Once upon a misty night Rya
went searching for her (best friend Yvette) while pacing
back and forth rubbing the back of her neck. Rya
couldn’t decide what to do ( what do I do ? )
shaking out her hands,breathing deeply
,palms sweaty.
Rya chucks on her shoes and
steps out the door. Bang!
Spinning around she questions. Later on
traveling through the forest
very nervously while the bright light was
flickering screaming HELP!!! .
She stopped and looked around and found
an old wooden oak bridge and
Rya started walking down the oaking
bridge she stopped.
steps out the door. Bang!
Spinning around she questions. Later on
traveling through the forest
very nervously while the bright light was
flickering screaming HELP!!! .
She stopped and looked around and found
an old wooden oak bridge and
Rya started walking down the oaking
bridge she stopped.
Heard footsteps she turned back and looked
but no one appeared.
Night time was heading fast while nearly half
way through the bridge
it hit night she heard sounds again the noise
started she was nearly
to the door but the sound echoing
through her ears.
but no one appeared.
Night time was heading fast while nearly half
way through the bridge
it hit night she heard sounds again the noise
started she was nearly
to the door but the sound echoing
through her ears.
Time paste it was midnight It wished
I didn’t leave the campsite
she stopped with frustration she felt the top
of the door frame running
her hands over the splintered wood until she
turned the doorknob and
felt a room of warmness.
I didn’t leave the campsite
she stopped with frustration she felt the top
of the door frame running
her hands over the splintered wood until she
turned the doorknob and
felt a room of warmness.
Later that night it hit 6 am and she started
walking down the oaking
crackling bridge she could hear the
whispering of a lady saying run but
she thought she was overreacting so she
ran to the campsite and no
was there. She shivered with frightness
in her eyes she stood there
horrified while pasting back and forward
while petrified with the silence.
She sat there trying too find were the
people went with shockness but
lucky Rya found her sister ( Rebecca )
coming her way while half asleep
yawing!!..
walking down the oaking
crackling bridge she could hear the
whispering of a lady saying run but
she thought she was overreacting so she
ran to the campsite and no
was there. She shivered with frightness
in her eyes she stood there
horrified while pasting back and forward
while petrified with the silence.
She sat there trying too find were the
people went with shockness but
lucky Rya found her sister ( Rebecca )
coming her way while half asleep
yawing!!..
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