Money Everywhere

WALT: solve money problems with our brains instead of using play money to help us 

Narrative writing

Narrative writing

WALT: Apply my knowledge of narrative writing to create an effective fictional story.

SC: I will-

• Create a setting by writing about who, what, where and when.
• Use descriptive and figurative language
• Hook my reader with dialogue, question, vivid description,...

DADWAVERS

Description  Action   Dialogue  Where   Adverb  Verb   Estimation of time  
Rhetorical Question.

  

VOCABULARY:

deduced retreat witness clue locate encounter evidence

hunch nervous divulge  observe investigate motive

uninhabited nervous suspect desperation hidden revealed

determined  decoy conceal divert secluded uncovered

Have you ever been lost? Well I’ll tell you a story about
the legend of the campsite .Once upon a misty night Rya
went searching for her (best friend Yvette) while pacing
back and forth rubbing the back of her neck. Rya
couldn’t decide what to do ( what do I do ? )
shaking out her hands,breathing deeply
,palms sweaty.

 Rya chucks on her shoes and
steps out the door. Bang!
Spinning around she questions. Later on 
traveling through the forest
very nervously while the bright light was
flickering screaming HELP!!! .
She stopped and looked around and found
an old wooden oak bridge and
Rya started  walking down the oaking
bridge she stopped. 

Heard footsteps she turned back and looked
but no one appeared.
Night time was heading fast while nearly half
way through the bridge
it hit night she heard  sounds again the noise
started she was nearly
to the door but the sound echoing
through her ears.

 Time paste it was midnight It wished
I didn’t leave the campsite
she stopped with frustration she felt the top
of the door frame running
her hands over the splintered wood until she
turned the doorknob and
felt a room of warmness.

Later that night it hit 6 am and she started
walking down the oaking
crackling bridge she could hear the
whispering of a lady saying run but
she thought she was overreacting so she 
ran to the campsite and no
was there. She shivered with frightness
in her eyes she stood there
horrified while pasting back and forward
while petrified with the silence.
She sat there trying too find were the
people went with shockness but
lucky Rya found her sister ( Rebecca )
coming  her way while half asleep
yawing!!..

   

Word of the day

This is for the word of the day We get chosen a word from our teacher and we make a slide show showing what we have done.
    

Comment

This week I commented on my sisters post about Te reo of the Maori alphabet

Here's my comment :

Reading

This Text, Is concerning how to preserve your self from lightning. Everything I have discovered is staying away from clear areas and large trees including Do Not Touch METAL OBJECTS !!! how? Because you could dissolve into ashes. What I remember about this novel, is how to save yourself from lightning blasts plus if your in that position.