Last weekend
W.A.L.T write narrative for our readers .
In my group for writing lessons were to express our self in our writing and
let people be amazed about our work .
It was a miserable freezing damp weekend . I woke up with many
thoughts in my mind .
I thought it was sunny but the Clouds were blocking the sun
I called out to my Chihuahua
in stead two kittens came
I called out to my mom . “Mum I’m hungry, feed me!!!!!” She replied, “that's
nice
get up.” I sat there confused, but still hungry I got up. After I peeled all
the kittens off me .
thoughts in my mind .
I thought it was sunny but the Clouds were blocking the sun
I called out to my Chihuahua
in stead two kittens came
I called out to my mom . “Mum I’m hungry, feed me!!!!!” She replied, “that's
nice
get up.” I sat there confused, but still hungry I got up. After I peeled all
the kittens off me .
With a bowl full of cornies I stomped back to my room. I opened my
chromebook and the white light flashed in my face . I
searched up “ YOUTUBE “
and finished my bowl of cornies watching a
video of gaccha life it was so funny.
chromebook and the white light flashed in my face . I
searched up “ YOUTUBE “
and finished my bowl of cornies watching a
video of gaccha life it was so funny.
Love it Rangi!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Rangi I love your recount it has looks of key words to make your reader wanna raed more ka pai Rangi keep the good work up
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