Lorde

Kia ora Here is my poster of Lorde, which I have completed for Day 1, Activity 1 (for the teaser week) of summer learning Journey here is the link to check out there blog if you want :) Slj blog.


I used pikotochart website, and if you want you can try this activity out too!

My media audit

W.A.L.T analyses, evaluate and participate with various of form media.

Ghouls

I have learned so much in Narrative. I now know how to structure my writing appropriately. 

Comment

This week I have commented on Chrystalles blog. What I have done was give her highlights on her work and the post I have commented on was her 3 waka hoes.

Athletics

This week for Athletics I have re caped what I have Written for Sports and Aesthetics are very challenging.

3 Waka hoe

This week for Study I have accomplished 3 waka hoes like Kaha, Aroha, Whakapono. I have accomplished what these 3 waka hoes mean to me and how they maintain my school rules.

My Example of Explain writing

 Explain writing.

We have learned so much in writing. I now know how to structure my writing appropriately. One of my highlights How I used a range of langue features such as elaboration, synonymous, antonyms.

What I did find  challenge for writing is how I chose out my 3 topics around how Maraes  are special to the community.

Here below is my self assessment and writing.

My self  assessment 

Reading

W.A.L.T

read a book and recap about the story.

Writing

Monday 14 October

Recount 

W.A.L.T: Rewrite your holiday.

Criteria:

I deliberately use vocabulary for effect 

Orientation: This is a recount about me going too tane mahuta

with me cousin and hung out at opononi.

First: 

It was a faded pastel sunrise. I plunged out of bed and

rushed to the holy magnificent kitchen where you could

get an amount of free food. I dashed back to my room

and watched youtube while finishing off my breakfast

later on it turned 8:00 I rushed and got changed and

took my dog for a walk and patiently waited till my

auntie and cousin arrived they got here and we

went off.

Secondly:

 To the dentist for my sister's teeth appointment and

I and my cousin waited in the car until they were

finished. Time went past and it turned 10:45 we

went to the cafe and picked out what we wanted

to eat. While my mom and aunty waited until 11:00

so my sister wai could eat and our parents were 

finished off eating.

Thirdly:

 We went to opononi and hung out at the beach

and went to the park and saw tane mahuta and

got some food and we hung out while taking my

dog for a walk while my mom and aunt were talking.

Finally:

 We went home to say goodbye to our aunt and cousin

because they had to go and we had a bit of time to hang

out together before they left and we sat down and shared

our pictures with each other when we took photos on the way. 

Reading

This book explains 

The remains about one man that protects Indian people that were

living under laws and he informed them how to be free and fell like themselves and he remained a hero including Dr.Martin Luther king. How he taught them was fighting, independence, peace why? because they were living under rules and they were called outsiders 

Word of day

This is what we have been doing in our spear time at school but I didn't get to finish.